Feedback:
- The camera was good and steady.
- Camera quality was the same and clear all the way through.
- With the dancing scenes, they're good, better than before, but we need to do more cuts between them, showing both scenes for the same amount of time.
- The amount of shots doesn't fill out the time of the song (more shots needed to fill the song out).
- Lollipop scenes with Mahira need to be changed, as the lollipop doesn't seem proffesional.
- The scene with Mahira by the tree needs to be taken out, as it doesn't suit the rest of the clip.
- More nature shots (filler shots)
- Show a contrast of Ramneek and Mahira shots.
- Add an end shot of Ramneek and Mahira to show the relationship (this will relate to the love theme we are going for).
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